Overall, it's too chaotic melodically to be enjoyable to listen to. It doesn't have any real key signature that it keeps or chord structure. I suggest learning a bit of music theory.
The grungy bass is a good synth, but it's used too much and you get board of it.
The song has a lot of energy, which is good, but it could use a build up at the start rather than beginning at such a jarring place.
The kick and snare bouncing from left to right is a nice touch.
OK guy, thanks for the review, I can have this for help myself, in the album version will be applied this :)
The beat is pretty weak imo, but the vocals are pretty good. I'm pretty sure it's the melody that makes the beat suck, maybe read up on some music theory could help.
thanks for the feedback man, I understand where you're coming from. I've been working on music theory recently, but I'm still working on it. Thank you for taking the time to listen to my songoli though. I appreciate it.
Feels too repetitive. Could be pretty good if it built up to a drop after 2 or 3 repetitions, but it just sort of did the same thing with minor variations until the end.
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